Thesis Statement Acheson

My thesis statement addresses Acheson's questions by addressing the topic, posing a question, and describing the various avenues I will explore in formulating my position. I pose the question of how the stage of a woman's life when they are trying to get pregnant, and experiencing of miscarriages, effect women on a deep level. My weakness exist in that I need to narrow down my focus in my supporting arguments. I am not sure if I am being too broad, but I think as I continue to look at more research on the subject I will become more clear.